The Dock Of The Bay

Friday, January 12, 2007

Mini-Saga: "Temporal curl"

Views from flat roof were marvellous. Above all beside Jane. His mobile fell down. He rushed down fast. His mobile was smashed. The worse thing was somebody had pushed Jane down! Ten minutes back on time would be enough. As he ran towards Jane he stumbled and pushed Jane down.

posted by blog writer at 1:51 PM

3 Comments:

  • Hello!
    A good mini-saga of murders, you have a good imagination. I like it!

    By Blogger Pumuky's & CO., at 12:13 AM  

  • Good job!
    My only comment...
    Wouldn't you say
    "stumbled" instead of "stumble"?
    Just to keep the past consistent.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 2:53 AM  

  • Interesting mini-saga! I really like what you write!

    By Blogger Nuria Vidal, at 2:05 PM  

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